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Newcomer: pickup clone dialog text (suggested improvement)
« on: December 20, 2012, 11:00:05 pm »
The pickup clone dialog text for a newcomer:
"As a newcomer, you are privileged for a free clone (have 100 available)."
would read better as:
"As a newcomer, you have the privilege of receiving a free clone.".

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